My Writing (stranded)

1. This is my writing I hope you like it i'm working on a picture for it with James It will be on my blog soon. Finally there’s a beautiful sparkling puddle of water I can see in the distance I rush up to it and take a big drink of it…. Just another Mirage. I will have to build and boat and try to get some people to help me of this dumb island! Food and water Is all I can think of but I must keep me mind of them so that I don’t maybe die quicker. OMG COCONUT TREE! I tell the others that there’s a coconut tree and I climb it as fast as I can. So I grab a coconut and crack it on my head! Then because the coconut is so hard I get a concussion and fall on the ground and that’s all I remember, next thing I know I’m sitting on the sand drinking coconut soup with all my family sitting around me. SUDDENLY a bear comes out of the bush and strikes a scratch at me I still can’t remember what happened and how I got here. Lucky It looks like my family had prepared weapons in case things like this happen. YYYEEEESS!!!! They killed the bear and we get food… WAIT… The bear has a family! This either means that we get more food, or we die :( I can’t help my family because I’m not well but I have to try because they can’t fight all those bears by themselves they will get killed! So I get up and grab the last spear that they made, and run in to the fight, In the end we WIN the fight and get extra food to hopefully survive.