These are the sick sentences.
The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.
These are my sentences.
The small rugby ball was zooming towards Richie as he Jumped up in the frosty air and held out his cold hands. He was committed to get that ball, it was all up to Richie quickly get the zooming ball and pass it and score a try.
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